tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178815524273214259.post7428735349797388342..comments2023-08-03T23:19:28.759-10:00Comments on The Dark Side of the room 3D: "Departure"Hawaiianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12959246148234832208noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178815524273214259.post-63762775151134790272010-11-30T16:59:05.051-10:002010-11-30T16:59:05.051-10:00I had the inkling he needs a send off sans the Cha...I had the inkling he needs a send off sans the Cham-pagen. I'll see what I can do.bwayzuhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14288117820919698416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8178815524273214259.post-2401686967932626962010-11-30T12:01:09.028-10:002010-11-30T12:01:09.028-10:00Great start B. layout is nice, the only thing that...Great start B. layout is nice, the only thing that really stands out is that there are only three dudes watching a god leave. I feel it needs a crowd because right now it feels sparse and a little less epic feeling than I believe you are going for. <br /><br />More people decending the pyramid in the foreground and crowds on the ground around the other pyramids would go a long way to making this the epic you want it to be.<br /><br />looking forward to color.<br /><br />Again, great start.Hawaiianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12959246148234832208noreply@blogger.com